dude thatw as pimp!! that rocked!! great poem 5/5

wow... this is great. its so decriptive and precise... good job.

That's like the BEST poem on the whole site!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 XXX *

that poem is very well written!! i liked it alot. you're a very passionate writer.

wow, that was CRAZY! I totally loved this poem. I agree with Charli. Defidently something to be proud of. Excellent excelent job. <3333

OMG I LOVE THAT SO MUCH! WAY TO WRITE! please read some of my poems im new to the site...and i want to get known, i really want to make a career out of writing, and you so should to! way to do this! <3

wow that was a really good poem i reallyliked the way you put murderer
at the end of each stanza. it made it really clear to picture it all keep it up you have talent.!
take care
HS

bomb poem its greeat

wow good job makeing the reader dragged into the poem

hey member me?
well omg that was so touching great job

Wow, this was dark. The words just brought out these images in my head. The words you used were great. Awesome poem. Keep up the good work!
5/5

<3 Darien

I loved the imagery. Very dark, and well written. Great poem. 5/5.

OMG! KARLY!!!!!

excellent choice of words. keep up the great work. take care, Marjan

Wow...that was really well written...I loved it all the way through...sent me chills throughout my body and kept me reading the whole way. take care xxx

omg, this was great!. I loved it.. ...the murderer... i liked that. that's what made the poem. if that hadn't been there. idk what it would have been. Great Job!

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Very dark poem! Dark poems are my favorite! Keep writing! ~Brooke~

such a great deep poem with the right words used i really enjoyed reading it :)

whoah...that was the best poem i've read in a while! that was awesome! so sad... poor girl(and guy!) well, great poem, great job! 5/5

GREAT JOB well written keep it up ok
~*kate*~ awesome job