Becky, A beautiful dedication whom I know you truly loved and I know in my heart he loved you in return and was thankful he had a wonderful daughter-in-law as you. Bless you, It is truly hard to lose those we love. hugs, love, Ann

Man...I think I might cry...!

Takes a lot for a poem to do that to me.

Great work.

Very very nice.

Anyone would be really proud to have such an amazing and loving poem written about them, he sounds like a great guy.
xx

Your work is very well presented thought out - it comes from the heart. I also like your quotes.

By the way, thanks for the correction in my poem - Ive sorted it out.

Peace and love to you.

the poem is an oustanding tribute to your father in law [you have the gift] thank you for sharing this so close to fathers day

Well written & straight from the heart. You are very talented! 5/5

Aww, Becky, this is by far one of your best. Amazing job.

thank you for all the comments

Awwww. This is so sweet! I rally enjoyed reading it. What a wonderful dedication to your father in law. So sad, it brought tears to my eyes. Excellent job! Thank you so very much for the comments on my poetry. They really mean alot to me. You truly ROCK!

A beautiful dedication for a beautiful soul! You really poured your heart into this one, it's written with so much emotion! It brought tears to my eyes, just know the one's who leave us are never really gone! They live forever within each of us....Love ya~Holly

Again, this poem flowed so beautifully, as even though the great cynic that I am prepares to scorn the obvious show of love, I cannot. Absolutely wonderful, and absolutely startling that I found myself close to tears.

You have wrote a poem about the man I long to be.

I don't know if you remember it, but you commented on one of my poems - "Good boys never win"...I just wanted to let you know that it was probably one of the nicest, warmest and uplifting messages I have ever been left. My sincere thanks, Jay.

WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

What a gift you have for expressing
your feelings in your poems and toward
the people you care about..I hung on
to every word of this poem..5/5

Shelby

Becky that was so beautiful and sad. You have a wonderful heart and it sounds as though Gene did to. He is in the Lord now reaping his just reward for the life he lived.
God Bless!

Oops! I meant to say "with" the Lord

Wow .. great poem ... well written with inspiring hidden meaning ... well done i loved it ... 5/5

What a beautifully penned tribute to someone who meant so much to you. I am sorry for your loss. Great job on the poem.

Your poet heart speaks well. I really liked your poem and the way it flowed with words chosen for just the right moment as your poem began to speak of that heart. Keep up the good works….I’ll be reading more…