What is Nothing?

by Katie McCullick   Jun 4, 2005


Love is nothing,friendship isn't either.
I've experience both,enjoyed neither.
Love is that very first kiss,
then wonderful freedom is what you miss.
It's a feeling you can't control,
and it seems everyday love takes its toll.
They are the one then thats all gone,
Passionate feelings you've missed all along.
Just when you say "never again"
Love creeps up on you like a mortal sin.
Uncontrollable feelings are taking over you.
While you should be screaming joyfully but grieve is what you do.
Life is to short and will pass you by.
So why waste your time missing that guy.
Friendship is but love in a different form.
It chases you down like a blazing storm.
Its a beautiful cloud that embraces the sun,
that transforms into a tornado and kills everyone.
You want to trust again, the stabbing is still there.
You know what they said and feel there stare.
Only fools would believe it though its not true.
Everyone is a fool, Even you.
Life is to short and will pass you by, so why waste your time with a friend, a lie.
Love is nothing, friendship isn't either,
I've experience both, enjoyed neither.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Hey i really like your poem, and its soo true! i also liked how well it flowed and how much emotion it portrayed throughout... the only thing that wasnt quite right, was the line
    "Uncontrollable feelings are taking over you.
    While you should be screaming joyfully but grieve is what you do."

    the last line is too long, so it doesnt sound like it flows.... just that though.. but keep up the good work it was great! please comment on my poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    oh, I really loved this one. it has a good flow to it. the choice of words
    is great. keep it up. you're really talented. much love, Marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    I loved this!! You did an excelnt job! you did good rhyming and making it work out! 5/5!