Through Time..She Does Fall..

by ♥CRIMSONxX♥   Jun 4, 2005


A ray of sunshine
A glimmer of hope
A bat of an eyelid
A slip down life’s slope
A tiny lifeless breath
A feeling in a toe
A movement from the lips
Is she alive? I want to know
A twitch from her leg
A clutch of a finger
A shiver down her spine
Is this life? That does linger
An attempt at a word
A very small sound
A lift of her hand
Then crashes to the ground
Eyelids fall shut
Now no movement at all
But inside her tiny soul
Through time, she does fall

*This poem, is supposed to represnt the last moments of someones life..just before she passed away forever..at the time she was only 5..Please comment and vote..*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    omg man this is so ....such.....wow....its a master peice!!!

    so sad yet deep....

    and it makes you think it has a story...

    hope its not true.:(

    xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Janine

    i realli like that poem
    its a great way of expressin it
    love me
    janine
    xoxox

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