wow thats awsome! good job
~*lindz*~

this is a really interesting poem coz some of the rhymes are a little forced but some bits are amazing! tis very good.

this is a beautiful poem
good job

great job. I thought this was an excellent write. <3333

Wow...another great poem. Like I said before keep up the writing.

Wow...all of your writes are so emotional..that is true talent. This was really great and sad and touching and beautiful. lol. keep it up. xxx

I decided to check your poems out because Michaela Chan insisted on her profile that you're a writer one in a million. I can see why. It's absolutely breathtaking. Many can relate to, and I think that was apart of your goal of touching 2000 unknown authour's hearts. Rest assure, I'm one in the 2000. 5/5

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Wow! I love this poem, and the way you use it. All of your poems I've read could touch someones heart! Very Nice!
~Lynn~