by Shawn Williams Jun 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As the darkness fades and the night slips away |
by shade127
This is wonderfully written. You need to write more! |
good job.. love it... |
by LAST RONIN
great work.. I liked the poem and the flow only one line I thought slowed down the poems pace...Im your rock...your my soft spot...our foundation built on God's strength... but the poem overall is great... very Hafizian.. |
Beautifully written. |
by Robert
This was really powerful I thought on your first time out I see you speak from the heart and soul that is very well done. Keep up the good work and I will be waiting for your next poem. Take care. |