Suiscides

by Jacklyn   Jun 5, 2005


No love for Seuicides,
No heart holds the thought of me,
People wishing just to leave me,
My boulder where I sit lonely,
Crying eyes as guilt fills your mind,
Wishing to die,
But immortality holds me alive,
My power no mortal man can survive.

~In English class we had to make up a god and what she would be like so i thought it would be intresting to do the God of suicide and how she might be and Seuicides is her name.~

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I like the name of the god too. ^_^

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    The God of Suicides...SO CREATIVE!!!! SO FRICKIN CREATIVE!!!!!!!! Never would've even THOUGHT of that! Beautiful poem!!!! Thank u so much for the comment and the r8. Hee hee u helped me out! WOO, I am proud of ya grrl, u have so much talent i know you've heard that a million times so i made it a million and one hahaha!!! TAKE SO MUCH CARE OF YOURSELF MUCH LUV LIL SLAM PEaCE, //aRi\\ aka ShadowShawdy aka Silent Attitude

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    This is quite complimentry of something i would write in my English class. Though i can say; your creativity and intelligence stunns me :D

    LoveView hun <3
    ~ Kals.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    INteresting, I enjoyed it, it was a clever poem, well done, a god of suicides interesting idea, keep it up xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Very creative, Jacklyn. The god of suicides, i would of never thought of that. 5/5 Great job.

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