Very creative, Jacklyn. The god of suicides, i would of never thought of that. 5/5 Great job.

INteresting, I enjoyed it, it was a clever poem, well done, a god of suicides interesting idea, keep it up xx

This is quite complimentry of something i would write in my English class. Though i can say; your creativity and intelligence stunns me :D

LoveView hun <3
~ Kals.

The God of Suicides...SO CREATIVE!!!! SO FRICKIN CREATIVE!!!!!!!! Never would've even THOUGHT of that! Beautiful poem!!!! Thank u so much for the comment and the r8. Hee hee u helped me out! WOO, I am proud of ya grrl, u have so much talent i know you've heard that a million times so i made it a million and one hahaha!!! TAKE SO MUCH CARE OF YOURSELF MUCH LUV LIL SLAM PEaCE, //aRi\\ aka ShadowShawdy aka Silent Attitude

I like the name of the god too. ^_^