by AJ Jun 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
You look me in the eyes, |
that is really good!!!!!!great job!!!! i enjoyed reading it!!! |
by Brookeღ
You expressed your feelings very well! Beautifully written, I can't write love poems probably because I have no luck in that department! ~Brooke~ |
by kiesha
I thought that was very beautiful. You can see a lot through a person's eyes, and you totally captured that. Nice. |
aww very nicely written!!! i really liked it. keep it up! |
by Lil Luce
wow i really enjoyed this poem!it was filled with such emotion u could eally feel it throught your words. u should be proud of yourself!woudl appreciate your somments on my work, please! |