I love it. Hopefully you read this and aren't another suicide cause like you mentioned in your poem. Your right about a lot though. Thanks for keeping it real. I love your poem, but hey hang in there. I've been to the brink of suicide myself but there always something holding me back. You need to identify with what that is and embrace it. Your a great poet. Look forward to some more of your work.

Really good! Thanks for commenting on mine!