Amazing! ... Truly amazing.
This is one of the best poems I have read in a very long time.
Well done, you should be proud of this.

Take care,
- Shell.

awwww this is so sad 5/5 you put this situtaion into words very nicly im glad i read this altho its making me cry take care n gr8 work luv rach

I think it was very good...keep it up!!

This is an excellent poem! Keep up the good work!

great job!! Awesome poem, i think that everyone that has a loved one or friend in the military can relate to this one. Great job! 5/5

wow that was really touching great job 5/5!!!!

wow that was amazing, it was so good. all i can say is wow.

alyssa

All i can really say is... thank you all for taking the time to read this poem.. I am very happy and pleased to see that my vision was able to be seen by so many other people without me having to actually show a visual. I will make sure i release more great poems for all to see... So keep checking back ~

that was really sad did it happen 2 a famely meber or somthing i loved it tho

Wow!! What a sad poem! You did a great job of keeping it realistic throughout the whole time. You gave us an outlook on what a soldier really goes through!! Good job! keep it up!! :)

Wow!! What a sad poem! You did a great job of keeping it realistic throughout the whole time. You gave us an outlook on what a soldier really goes through!! Good job! keep it up!! :)

Although your right it was long it was great and did have a realastic quality to it. I also love the idea that it contuied beyond his death. It was very good. Please if u get the chance could you commit on my poem. TY.

Bloody Brilliant! Keep it up. 5/5! Great emotion is in that poem and it has great depth! BRILL! Lotsa luv, Gem xx

beatiful poem very well written and sad. you got your point across very nicely

that was soo sad i am crying you really touched my heart beautiful beautiful!!!!

i really lyk it

thank you all. :)

this was great it was very touching and was full of strenght and courage i think this poem come from inside u . i truly think u should keep writing these poems their very touching there the kinds of poems u could learn from and go deep inside to understand i hope u know what im talking about u should continue doing this,this is real talent im hoping to read more of your poems

I love it! Its very realistic as you said. I'm sure this happens a lot and its very sad. Great job. 5/5

.Savannah.

Wow im at tears....amazing poem.