beautiful write hun, another great of masterpiece, like the evry stanza, inside have great meaning, keep your beautiful work, hugs______take care.

ps: thanks for let me using one of them, need not for me to say, you know what i mean..;) lol_______

bert.

Exuisite poem Heather your work is always amazing!
5/5 Dave.....

5/5 another awesome poem. keep it up. and thanx for the title suggestions I liked the one Walking in Terror.
Love always,
Elissa

Amazing job once again. Great job. love, Ann

Well done...I admire your poetry! It's always written with such depth....Brilliant as always~Holly

heather ALL of your poems are so good. this one i'd have to say is one of the best tho. great job.

X-cellent poem, this one. You are so awesome with poetic skill, I am flattered by your comments on my poetry. Thank you. 5 for this one, tata

Eden

Very nicely written.. I loved the last verse.. Keep writing and take care ((always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

This poem is really good. All your poems are. good job!

I'm sorry for commenting kinda late, but, I just got the chance to read this and it's REALLY good. (((5/5))) Your stuff is always good. I envy you. There's always a sort of hidden deepness in each poem you write, it's awesome... don't ever stop writing, or sharing it with us! Is it just me, or does it seem like all the really good poets on this site are leaving lately..? I dunno. Anyways, I'll stop babbling now... keep it up!
Take Care.
Always, Danielle.

brilliant!!! beautifully written. i love the message. you're extremely talented. ikeep it up!
-xXx-

Beautiful and full of meaning. Those are not compliments but rather the truth, as well as describing words for what I felt when I read it. But of course, you know this already because you have it copyrighted. This is close to my style of writing, but obviously you have more talent. one again...beautiful, i hope to see more of your poems
-Clonjey

*gaps*..i'm uhh...speechless. really, i am....well sort of =P lol....this is just amazing, wow.....i think it's my favorite by you =)....heather, wow....keep up the awesome work, you have so much talent!! i'm so jealous lol....once again, amazing poem, as always, keep it up...love you lots =) *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Heather, amazing once again, I only read your work here, and you have taught me so much. thank you for being you, you touch the lives of people around you more than you will ever know, becuase your messages are being read and emailed for the world to see..................so much deep talent............Love ya Becky

WOW great work! 5/5 for sure. love the last line, and it's a catchy title, i like it.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love

~i like roses, they're pretty~

Hey Heather, this is really good...and it makes a lot of sense!! Keep on writing and take care..ur an awesome writer!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Damn, u are outta sight! You write very well for a 16-year-old. Im old, and i have refined my style through the years, but I doubt I was as good as you at 16.