Wow! I am so sorry for the loss my friend..Not sure if you were real close with him or not..But Im sorry for the family too...That is such a terrible thing and it breaks my heart to know children are dieing..Great Job!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

OH MA GOD!!!! the is just so sad ><
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lol..... *sob**sob**hug*

thats a nice poem...better then u think....just be thankful that he did pass away, cuz now he doesnt have to go through the pain and that torture...good job

This poem was so sad...Although i wont pray to gods for him (i am an atheist) i hope his soul will rest...

Thats such a sad poem! Thanks for putting me on your favorites! I love you poems too! So I did the same! Great poem! I loved it! 5/5. definitely!

Thats such a sad poem! Thanks for putting me on your favorites! I love you poems too! So I did the same! Great poem! I loved it! 5/5. definitely!

He's too young to die... how can he die wen he didn't even get a chance to live... such tragedy.. u really put ur emotions into the poem... and the poem's great too..