this is an amazing poem! so effortlessly powerful and so fluent. its got amazing images and its easy to read. its really REALLY good!

this is truly one of the best poems I've ever read, It flows perfect, and you are a writer that makes the reader keep reading...............i loved it, you are going in my favorites...I also love your sense of humor in your profile, it was fun reading that to, that is proof you are good, when your profile is as good as some poems.........love ya becky

Very meaningful poem a pleasure to read!

take care

OK, wow, very good, very deep. well kinda. You did a great job of this

Also the tings i should have said, couldn't comment, but it was one of the best i've read. Truly incredible and i agree, it does echo in your mind.