I really hope this isnt about someone you know. its just so sad.
An amazingly good poem, really grips your emotions.
keep it up 5/5
Love Katie x

That was really really sad, keep it up, you are a great writer.. xxx

Thank you so much for the comments, no this didnt happen to me or anyone i know, i just was inspired by something i saw to write it....thanks again
xxxx

5/5. this is so well writen, i can't tell you how much i feel i can relate to this poem, you really go the emotions in it, practically crying, gez, i can just relate to this so well.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~