by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jun 6, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
"No, I'm sorry, please come |
by Pesamenteiro
I love the idea of this poem, it really shows how one lost loved one can effect someone. Its a really sad poem. P{erhaps stronger words would make it a bit better, maybe it sounds better this way, simple is good sometimes, especially for this poem. |
by Robie Lincer
Wow! at the begining it wasnt that good! but then towards the end it was great |
Crazy.. this poem gave me chills, it just keeps me guessing.. (in a good way) so sad and thought out i can tell this took time and effort, and it was worth it, great write. |
I loved how u left this story to continue simply because it's soewhat true it's a chain reaction like that ....because we all start to realize everything...and all...great writing here and fantastic flow... |
Wow... great job it gave me goosebumps... something that doesnt normallt happen |