well down the cycel makes you think

Great poem.

Wow.. i love this poem... i dont even know what to say.. it just "is" ... we all feel as if we will die for love, because once your heart is broken, there seems no hope to live anymore, with all the guilt and aguish you feel.. but i guess the feeling wont gay away. i still love the guy who told me goodbye, and never loved since.... its pathetic i know.. but what can i do.. im dying for his love...

Wow... great job it gave me goosebumps... something that doesnt normallt happen

I loved how u left this story to continue simply because it's soewhat true it's a chain reaction like that ....because we all start to realize everything...and all...great writing here and fantastic flow...

Crazy.. this poem gave me chills, it just keeps me guessing.. (in a good way) so sad and thought out i can tell this took time and effort, and it was worth it, great write.

5/5

Tiny Heart

Wow! at the begining it wasnt that good! but then towards the end it was great

keep it up!

I love the idea of this poem, it really shows how one lost loved one can effect someone. Its a really sad poem. P{erhaps stronger words would make it a bit better, maybe it sounds better this way, simple is good sometimes, especially for this poem.
I definatly couldn't write something like this.
5/5
-Onyx