Bleed and Bleed

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jun 6, 2005


Slit my wrist and watch me die,
This life was too hard to try.
Won't someone save me from myself,
And give life back it's sweet wealth.
I cry for you at night;
I'm ready for the light.
Yet my darkness cares for me,
I'm exactly what I want to be.
Sitting all alone
I rock myself to a screaming drone.
The scream is my own,
As I cut through flesh and bone.
I see this and laugh,
A hollow and shattering laugh.
You'll never stop me,
As I bleed and bleed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Loved how the 1st line, and last line, went together, it made the whole poem awsome

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    As i read the first line i thouhgt it was going to be another 'aww sad teen omg my life sucks poem' . i was proved wrong. the rhyming-even though simplistic, really worked for this poem. it kept me reading and flowed very well. one thing- hollow, not hallow..

    5/5

    tinyheart

  • 18 years ago

    by ..*..kayla..*..

    Ok this is like really good!!! i give you a 5/5... i totally understand what your saying!! i go through things like this and i feel like you discribed in this poem!! its really good!! keep up the good work!!!
    xoxooxxoxoox
    kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh my, i loved this poem, about something i dont generally read, it really was awesome
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  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really liked this!!!! muy bueno!!!!!!!!! yay for you

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