woh this poem is so good. i totaly get what your saying. wish ide wrote it =P

Awesome.

Youre such a talented writer, you write about things that i can really relate to..and even if this didnt happen to you, its still great to know someone nos how i feel.. keep up the good work hun xox

wow thats one powerful poem... jeez, i hope that this isnt an inner you brekaing out... thats kinda scary and makes me worry... i know what its like to be depressed... but i also know what its like to be happy... for the time being im the later... but just a lil while ago i was the former... its not fun... i used to cut but ive sworn it off... at the request of my boyfriend.. so hang in there... im here if you need me!
take care of you
amanda

good job!!!!!!

I can relate to this one for somepoint in my life, much like your others, you write dark things, which i completely love, like i've said before, well done ^.^

I really liked this!!!! muy bueno!!!!!!!!! yay for you

Oh my, i loved this poem, about something i dont generally read, it really was awesome
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Ok this is like really good!!! i give you a 5/5... i totally understand what your saying!! i go through things like this and i feel like you discribed in this poem!! its really good!! keep up the good work!!!
xoxooxxoxoox
kayla

As i read the first line i thouhgt it was going to be another 'aww sad teen omg my life sucks poem' . i was proved wrong. the rhyming-even though simplistic, really worked for this poem. it kept me reading and flowed very well. one thing- hollow, not hallow..

5/5

tinyheart

Loved how the 1st line, and last line, went together, it made the whole poem awsome

keep it up!