that was really good! you have a way with words. keep up the great work! *May*

Really good poem, you did a good job I can really feel what you're saying and I think the other people here can too..
I gave you a 5 for it and you know what
this could have been the lyrics from 50cent :P lol ( That's a good comment )
Keep on the good work!

xxx milou

Awesome job! I like your poem. Sometimes the same questions pop into my head. But you're right. All you can do is just live your life. Keep it up and take care.