I REALLY REALLY REALY LOVED THE END OF IT...IT SEEMED TO TIE THE WHOLE POEM TOGETHER IN A DIFFERENT WAY...YOUR A GREAT WRITER, N' SINCE YOU LOVE TO WRITE I HOPE YOU DON'T QUIT...I LOVE UR POEMS...AWESOME WORK

oh, i can really relate to this poem. if this is how you feel, then i know how it is. excellent poem. keep it up and thanks for the comments. take care:)