Hellish Bliss...

by Eibutsina   Jun 6, 2005


When evil does portray
The atmosphere unseen
It will surely remain
Striking with deadly blows
Whichever way you turn
If you shall bare the signs
Fall pray to its vileness
Pray to God for its swiftness
To prompt your soul
Into a darkness filled oblivion
A hellish bliss.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    The message Nada wrote is the same message in this poem that I got!! I love these new style of poetry your writing Eirisa! You have a talent that no matter what you write and how you write it will be great!!!
    5/5 as always sis!
    Love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by lakitu

    Good one, very deep and dark 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by lakitu

    Good one, very deep and dark 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    A little short. Good, but I think you could have made it a bit longer. I'm not very good at interpreting poetry, because people write from so many different points of view, and circumstance, so I didn't quite catch on immediately.

    Nonetheless, I think it could've been a bit longer! =)

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Why the low rating? =( I think it was a wonderful poem, muh dear. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5

    <3 Heather.

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