Great write, I agree with Nada^ its quite powerful. Keep on writing.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Why the low rating? =( I think it was a wonderful poem, muh dear. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5

<3 Heather.

A little short. Good, but I think you could have made it a bit longer. I'm not very good at interpreting poetry, because people write from so many different points of view, and circumstance, so I didn't quite catch on immediately.

Nonetheless, I think it could've been a bit longer! =)

~Ciao Lipton

Good one, very deep and dark 5/5

Good one, very deep and dark 5/5

The message Nada wrote is the same message in this poem that I got!! I love these new style of poetry your writing Eirisa! You have a talent that no matter what you write and how you write it will be great!!!
5/5 as always sis!
Love,
~Chelsey~