this is so good. its really intriguing, and pretty much describes how i'm feeling at the moment. a v cool poem

Wow, that was great! I like the way each line in every stanza rhymes. Adding you to my faves! 5/5

That was a really good poem each line flowed onto the next very good writing!

take care

Very well done! Nice flow I look forward to reading more of your work! Thanks for the comments on mine always appreciated. Take Care! Brooke~