I really do like it a lot. It is so open to what others may be going through, I can't even describe what your meaning for it is. For me though, it's just a place to get away from everyone else who seems to always be putting me down. (I'm afraid of bees anyways, lol) But anyways, I know that when I get frustrated, I don't want anyone intruding on my silence, either. But that's just what it means to me. It could be something completely different for you or someone else. Great poem. Flawless, once again!

Eden

heehee i know what the hidden meaning is...but only cuz u told me, not because im super duper intelligent unfortunately! I think this is my favourite of all ur poems lucy....actually i dont know cuz sleepy head is fantastic and i love stab me slowly...oh theyre all so brilliant!!! i dont think i can have a favourite! anyway! I love it! send me ur new one asap!

that one is very very nice but im not sure what your hidden meaning is
5/5
*allalone*

Ahh my darling, tiz a wonderful poem that I have eventually found you on this darn place... Yay! Loving your everything my darling,

hi again! i noticed you like using the phrase "imagination unfurled" (i read your quotes). i like it because it's a good expression of the word, like you're comparing imagination to a flower, unfurling one petal at a time... really like it :)

just a question: does this have anything to do with death or dying?