by =)~ BJ ~(= Jun 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You're my friend, |
by Ashli
again, all poems have a flow...this one was a little choppy in the flow area, but it had a nice idea to it, nice word choice, and nice placing of lines...good job! |
by Sarah Ann
I thought it was good..you somewhat have a uniwue style that keeps the reader interested. |
by Lecrissa
very good hon |
I love it babe! mwah. gonna read ur others now. :D 5/5 |
by EoB
It is somewhat unoriginal, but still cute, and hard not to like:) |