so beautirul, somone is lucky to have you in their lives...........as we are lucky to be able to share in your talent.....love ya Becky

Becky, thank you so much for that.

It is somewhat unoriginal, but still cute, and hard not to like:)

*off to read the other two*

I love it babe! mwah. gonna read ur others now. :D 5/5

very good hon

I thought it was good..you somewhat have a uniwue style that keeps the reader interested.

again, all poems have a flow...this one was a little choppy in the flow area, but it had a nice idea to it, nice word choice, and nice placing of lines...good job!