by =)~ BJ ~(= Jun 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
How can you love someone |
by Ashli
all poems have a flow, but either it's good or it's not...and this one is right in the middle...it's not horribly bad, but it's not absolutely perfect either...but nice idea, good word choice! keep it up! |
by Andrea
i liked this one. it had good emotion! |
by Sarah Ann
Excellent poem! that was very powerful. I know how you feel. Great job. xxx |
by ** JeNa **
i thought it was a great poem, and i know how u feel when u ask how can u love someone, cuz ive been there 2, great job!! |
by Brookeღ
Another great poem! This one reminds me of my son. I was with his father for 9 years. The love that came from that relationship was my son! Once again a job well done! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Brooke~ |