i really liked it i can relate good job

Actually, I liked this one. So much emotion, and a very unique format. I love it, actually. I hope you are ok, and if you ever need to talk, I'm here.
Car
(By the way, i really like your user name... it reminds me of my fave book... flowers in the attic. Anywho, i really like it!)

I love this line:
"Trapped within my soul."
So often we actually cut ourselves off from others and create a type of personal cage; I think this line describes that perfectly.