Greatly and truly loved it, perfectly worded. I can see how you feel through your words, and relate just as easily. *bows* -Jason

good poem. it had a nice flow. I can easily relate. xxx

VERY creative!! i really liked it!! 5/5
love always,
Abcede :)

Always a storm to pass through in life. But with an attitude like yours, I'm positive you'll make it. You're a great writer, never give it up. =) 5/5.

~rolo

Wow that was an excellent poem! I really liked it, and I can relate to it alot. My Favorite line was 'Everyone takes, but no one gives." because it is so true! 5

Beautiful poem. I love the idea. Its something that I've recently been going through. Keep up the good work!

Take care,
Renee

Very true. another great poem

very well written i loved it!

Great poem. It's weird how I totally feel like this.