Where...oh..that one..there!

by Sparklylipgloss   Jun 6, 2005


You’re really going wrong with this one.
At the end. all you’ll be able to do is run

The cute little notes aren’t going to help you now
Your on center stage but your not taking your bow.

Is that because you don’t want the attention any more?
Now you know what it’s like when lifes partly tore.

You never thought it would feel this way!
Well things weren’t going your way everyday.

So princess learn this lesson right now, right hear.
Life is a falling black mascara tear.

With you treating people the way you do!
The way you actions speak louder then the words they hear from you.

True love can seem so real.
Its like a circle or one revolving wheel.

All you do is start and end.
Realize it was all pretend.

So hop on the wheel and don’t let go.
Time now will be passing slow.

But no matter what you do or say.
The big guy up theres with you through out your day.

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  • 19 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    its good i like it...thanks for commenting on my poem...what did you mean by a sequal? do you mean i should write one of her making it through and one of her dieing? then that would make three wow....THANK YOU for that AWESOME idea....thnx much...please comment n rate on some of my other poems id like to hear your input.....thnx...xxx Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by »*GEORGiE*«

    aww.. how sweet* :)

    Chrissy<3

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    writing*

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Thanks for the comment and keep writiting!....I like the last couplet.