Comments : What are you trying to say?

  • 19 years ago

    by Treakle

    Aaaaw i love the beginning of relationships, especially when they feel like this, such a happy poem!!
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Anna

    yey!
    he he
    I remember feeling this! like your walking on air or clouds or something
    I'm so glad you're feeling this way
    lovely happy loved up poem!
    love you
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gem

    This is soooooooo sweet! I know what the beginning feels like, it's almost like a dream that you never wanna wake up from. Gorgeous poem, loved it!! 5/5 and a sticker, lol. Keep writing!! Lotsa luv, Gem xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    That was so great, it made me all tingly lol...I know the feeling, very well written,keep it up...stay strong
    xxxxxxxxx

  • awww it's all happyful! hehe.

    Thanks for your comments on my work, no, it wasn't about someone I know. In fact, I guess I got most of the ideas from this website.

    Charlie x