Goodnight Kiss...Bleah

by †JustAri†   Jun 6, 2005


Lips of recollecting happiness
Close ever so delicately
It's like you kissed my heart goodnight
And left my hands hanging

Somewhere left on the inside
That's where I shake
I wonder how long
Can you keep my heart from breaking?

*I'm not so good at writing lovey-lovey poems....BLEAH*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I can almost picture myself holding my hands out only for them to be left there. Great two verses hun <3

    LoveView,
    - Kals.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i'm not good at love poems, but have we all have our subjects that we need to improve on, i think that you WILL definately be able to become really good at them! you have very gifted talent and for the subject of love i admitt i NEED practice but you will get better. it's a good job though! keep up the wonderful work

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

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