Comments : The First Time...

  • 19 years ago

    by Erinn

    I would really appreciate it if you would vote

    XOXO,
    Erinn

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessie

    hey really good poem i like it alot it means alot about u loving a guy and never wanna lose him that is how i feel about this guy well email me back x3jessx3x3@yahoo.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Good work, I especially like the fairytale ending!

  • 19 years ago

    by Elijah

    very nice job

  • 19 years ago

    by Iyla

    awww that was really sweet, and touching, great job. 5/5
    always,
    -Kit

  • 19 years ago

    by April

    Very sweet poem, I can relate to how I feel with my b/f. 5/5 keep up th egood work.
    -ApRiL

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    i love this poem. it's so much happiness. i loved it and you should keep on writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Erinn

    Thanks for all the comments yall!! it means alot to me!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Wow...that was so great and sweet...I'm glad you have found some one like that....stay strong
    xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany Stone

    Wow!!! Very good!!! 5/5 totally, i love your work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kassie

    That is a really good poem. You are such an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!