Comments : Madame Urchin

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    the beautiful character of this woman is beyond depressing and reaching. this poem is beyond avid and unique - it is, to say the least, fantastic in every line.

    it is so unbelievably sad... yet her seclusion. the smile without teeth. her existance in spite of others. her sorrow never expressed. amazing. so amazing. your best yet - if i might so inquire to say.

    beyond fantastic and amazing spliced together.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    You deffinatley have a unique style of writing hun.
    This poem is spot on the mark; as many do walk along in sufferance but 'never complain of their strife'.

    Kudos to you sweetie,
    // Kals.