by Brian King Jun 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
So fragile and refined, just like Atlantis |
Yes i agree with Sarah, |
by Little Dot
I think this title works really well with your poem. Your rhymes seem forced in parts of this poem. You could try to put more emotion into the poem. It has a nice rhythme but I think you could improve some of the verses. |