by The Flame Within Jun 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Every second every minute of every day is every time i hurt whenever your away because every word of every line is when i feel you are mine |
by girlii797
wow this is different then your normal poems. But equally good... |
by Just Sierra
Omg......SOOOOO GOOD!!! That sounds like a sad kind of love. Sort of unhealthy, but love is love. I'm glad you still stand strong in it. GREAT job!!! :-D!! |
good poem and i love it keep it up and it touched me alot. |
aww... so sweet. this is beautiful!!! keep it up! |
by Eden
Very good poem. It really touched me. Keep up the good work, I can't wait until your next one! |