Very good poem. It really touched me. Keep up the good work, I can't wait until your next one!

Eden

aww... so sweet. this is beautiful!!! keep it up!
-xXx-

good poem and i love it keep it up and it touched me alot.

Omg......SOOOOO GOOD!!! That sounds like a sad kind of love. Sort of unhealthy, but love is love. I'm glad you still stand strong in it. GREAT job!!! :-D!!

Love you lots~!~

~Sierra

wow this is different then your normal poems. But equally good...

keep up the good work.

~girlii797