Death's Kiss

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jun 7, 2005


The blade against my wrist,
I'll give sweet death a kiss.

Blood trickles off my fingers,
While the sweet smell of blood lingers.

I breathe my last breath,
As death greets my step.

I sigh a breath of sadness,
As my final sins confess.

I scream in pain,
As my soul is taken in vain.

My eyes fill with tears,
As I realize no one hears.

My worst fears have come to life,
And my body, in pain, begins to strife.
I am left alone,
To resurrect a new home;

My soul is lifted,
And my body, mind, and heart twisted.

I sigh myself to sleep,
That I will forever keep.

This is the end for me,
This is my last and final deed.
The light fades gray,
There is no way...

I will never live through this,
I'm going straight to the dark abyss.
But suddenly I open my eyes,
And think they defy,
For I see my good friend,
Standing on the wind.

He looked at me,
With a painful fee,
He smiled a painful smile,
Looking at me all the while.

Then I saw something in his face,
And see life has left without a trace.
So I look at him,
And he smiled then,
'To be with you.'
...And then I knew I was not alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another nice poem! you really know how to write dark poems! you are good at it!

    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    I dont think this is your best work.. the story was intriguing(sp?) but the overall poem was not that great, manythings were repeated. also the random line lengths and different sized stanzas caused me to get annoyed, it didnt flow as well as it could, with some minor touch ups, -using synonyms to replace overused words or words that cause the lines to be too long(or short) could really improve it.

    4/5

    *tinyheart*

  • Not bad ...not bad at all.....lol

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked the way this went from being sad to hopeful. I loved the first half it was brilliantly written but I felt the poem lost it's way a little half way through.
    Great job though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Suchapoetictradgedy

    Wow! Thats all I can say.......good job on this one! Im speechless!!!