Comments : Love Addict

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    abit too wordy and choppy to read I would revise alot of this poem make it more stream line get to the point faster ok take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    I partly agree with Robert about this poem. There seems to be too much description in some places and not enough in others.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    Thank you I really wrote this one from the heart as I do with most poems. This tells a story and I wanted to invite you all into this girls world so yeah thanx for reading....

    Naima

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Good poem!! nice job and great work!! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    Thanx Travis aww thanx and to everyone else who has voted and commented on my work thanx.I will try to read and comment on everyone else's work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    This is an awesome 'song' .. yup
    your poem makes a really creative song. I can just hear it in my head..

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    really, darien? well I am a singer/songwriter.... so yeah get back to me on the song.... I really would like your imput

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Agreed. Well told.

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    thank you everyone!!!!

  • This poem would be sooo good...if you changed somethings on it...but i guess that the original is the best...lolz...good luck in the future with ur poetry...very talented gurl

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    Thanx alot