Very well written... I know I am commenting on all, but they are all so good. You should be lucky.. Most of the peoples poems I read I give bad comments, but you, are a whole new world to poetry. I do wish I was as good as you. Maybe if I keep writting for a thousand years I will have succedded into what you have.

This is probably one of the best poems i've ever read on this site, i dont know why anyone hasnt read or commented..this is really really good stuff you've got here and im adding you to my favorites, i hope you don't mind. again, beautiful poem.