I love the intensity of all of your poems - sorry I havent commented lately. And it does warm my heart to hear from you! I'll e-mail you.

Awesome job mate. A very disjointed piece. I don't know if it was done on purpose, but you mention insanity (or the narrative being crazy), and your style influences abnormalty, which can be seen as being crazy.
A very nice poem. The "HE(ll)AVEN" bit is a nice touch. This poem could be great to read in between the lines, and look past the nonesense theme. I liked it.