wow! this is such a good discription of what its like to dream. and it has amazing and creepy images. very good.

thanks one more time Silver Wolf for the comments. this poem is the best one i've written(my opinion) and i didn't mean for it to sound so wierd. i have multiple personalities and they were all fighting in my head and they wrote their own thing that's why it is in "we" and "us" not "I" and "me" now everyone is going to think im crazy and i belong in a looney house, i only get this way during school because i am deprived of sleep.

*allalone*