Comments : Happiness

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Is it, okay then. Be happy, and the title don't really suites the category but the poem is. I don't mean to be mean but i think you can be a better writer, i'm not very good myself so i hope someone can tell me ways to improve too.

    You can start by writing poems that rhymes. I don't mean it's necessary to write poems that rhymes, just thought you could come out with better poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by LinkinParkFreak

    Hey lette!!!!! this poem kicks ass...MFCL!!!!! tkae care and keep throwin dat hatchet!!