please take some time to read all my other poems they are really good better than this one they just arent on the front page where everyone can read them so please take a look at those too.

~David~

hey... thank you so much for your comment... i'm glad some people understand even if the love of my life doesn't. I know people say 16 is too young to be in love but you can't control how, when, where and with who you fall in love... love is blind and confusing but it still IS... no-one can change that. I hope your ex realises she can't do any better than a guy like you... if you dont mind me asking how did she hurt you? cheat? or more like my man... in many ways? great poem... i'll be sure to read more... take care xxx

well see she talks to her old bf's and this guy that i just hate terribly. im so over protective over her, i know its bad but i wouldnt want anyone to mess things up between me and her and we always fight i mean always. theres many ways but i will tell you in a minute i have to do something for a sec brb
~David~

You never did say what she did... ? lol... sorry I haven't been check stuff for a while. I will keep checking from now on though. love always xxx

Great write, thanksfor the comment, too. You expressed it really well, even though I do not know the feeling, I can get a pretty clear picture from the words you put together : )
Great job, 5/5 from me.
XxX
Robin

Your poems speaks of your relationship with a young lady, that may not see the love that you have for her... I am not giving advise, but from my stand point, I would fine myself, began to love myself, not for her but for myself.. then do somethings for myself.

Love is full of emotions good and bad, if a lady or man love someone, they learn them, trust them, cater to them, give to them and respect them.

In relationships you have to give 100% a piece... 50/50 wont do. Seeing eye to eye, giving one their space and bringing something to the table besides sex, tht is another story.. women want to be loved from the head before getting into bed... that is when you know you have a good one. Be strong..