wow...beautifully written!!!

cool! the beginning was great!! it totally grabbed my attention!! awesome job!
peace,
Abcede :P

another good one! Love the words you used, somehow it sounded different then most other poems I've read, I mean, really creative..keep it up
~Christina

omg this is really good billion/5 so good i might add u 2 my favs

Wow! this poem was really good. it got my attention right away and i had the urge to keep reading. excellent work