So...It;s ok. I like your other poem "nothing will ever be the same" much more. It's much better. That's a fact. I feel like I've seen it all before, I heard it all before! Nothing knew. You seem to have rhyme vomit in this one cause you felt the need to make it all rhyme, but it wasn't as great as your other one. So your om's gone? AND? Make me feel it. I felt that you were holding back. You didn't out your all into it. To me it's made clear as day but hey better luck next time......

lol i love comments like that cause you tell me the truth.....but some people told me they did like "nothing will ever be the same" some of my poems 1 person will love it and one will hate it. It weird lol

nice poem! ya did good with the writing and everything! 5/5!

Wow that was such a great poem! 5 I love my mommy to!!!!

omg this is a sad poem :)

em i commented and voted on 3 of your poems and am going to do more plz repay :)

great poem, maybe a little work but great idea

wow good poem and good twist at the end. the only think id comment on was the lack of decription...put more imagery, similies and metaphors in ur work and it wud really improve...but all the same was good poem :)
please comment on some of mine
xxxLoUxxx

Awwwww.....that's so sweet
~Emmy

i liked this poem. good job