i love this one, nice work ^.^

Good poem. 5/5 kilman = David B.

this one is absolutely amazing.. i love the way u rhyme!! its so easy.. and the flow is wonderful.. the words are very deep n touching.. and i especially lovd this part:
be true to me
cause i don't know if i could take it
if you keep taking my heart
and trying to break it

it brings tears to my eyes..
i lovd this one.. i think ull look nice in my faves.. lol :P
take care
nouna

I decided to read one of your quotes, and i thought that it was really good. But man this is amazing!!!! i loved this poem and im planning on reading more of yours!
Hugs n SMiles Ashley

This is a well done poem. you have a lot of talent for someone so young. you should be proud.

This one is good and I think it will be better if you changed some wordings to inculcate a good flow :)

Tc
Fsams