Time

by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~   Jun 7, 2005


Time
is something never ending
it spins on the kitchen clock
or is something dads always complain their isn\'t enough of
time is what life revolves around
cause when time rolls on life is sure to follow

:) please comment love te hear from my peeps (:

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Lots of thanx ed

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Who cares what u think

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Haha. Maybe you should just try to look at it in a different way. Then you'd see what *I* mean.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    maybe you didn't get it Sarah but this poem is about time and express' my curiosity and my frustration about understanding its true meaning. By implying the few things I know about it.
    Also this poem is written from the view of a young child.
    I thought it was pretty dam obvious!
    But I will let u off the hook, because I pity your stupidity!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    I don't know, I didn't really like it. Like you've been posting on my poems "Not Enough Emotion"

    Life doesn't neccesarily revolve around time. In some ways, yes, in most ways, no.

    -Sarah

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