This poems seems like you seemed to be more discusted with some one more then anything. But that was it. Maybe they seem to know more then you because of thier age but people always need to learn something. Intresting to say the least.

Maybe they seem to know more then you because of thier age <-- it's like youre psychic... well, of course they do but at least this person should have the decency not to snob me. thats whats the poem is all about. no one is so special after all.

IT's alright, you used the line 'You think you're right about everything' too much. But then again, in a song it would be good as back up vocals. So as a poem it's alright.. might be better as a song, I don't know..

i wouldnt make too many repetitions ina poem for sure! hehe, so u should judge it as a song lyric